We are Team 17, a Year 6 class at Bailey Road School in Mt Wellington, Auckland, New Zealand. Our teacher is Mr. Wood and we want to share our learning with our whānau (family) and other learners. We hope you will enjoy our blog and leave us comments.
Monday, March 22, 2010
The Simpsons Team Brainstorm how we are polluting
The Simpsons Team brainstorm how we are polluting our environment.
The Simpsons Team brainstorm how we are polluting our environment.
You have brainstormed some good issues but what could you add to make your message clearer to your readers?
ReplyDeleteWe can make the words more neater and nicer.We can explain it on what we have drawn.We can explain it more.
ReplyDeleteYour brainstorm was good.
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