We are Team 17, a Year 6 class at Bailey Road School in Mt Wellington, Auckland, New Zealand. Our teacher is Mr. Wood and we want to share our learning with our whānau (family) and other learners. We hope you will enjoy our blog and leave us comments.
Monday, March 22, 2010
Team Solar Moon on Global Warming
If it gets too hot in Antarctica all the ice will melt, and all the polar bears and penguins will die by drowning in the water, and the water will cause the water levels to rise, so some of the islands will be covered by water.
The effect would be, that all the people that can't swim will drowned and all the people that can swim can't survive because. They can't swim to another country.
Yes islands could be covered by water but both polar bears and penguins swim. What would be the effect of the islands being covered by water?
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The effect would be, that all the people that can't swim will drowned and all the people that can swim can't survive because. They can't swim to another country.
ReplyDeleteI wish that didnn't happen to me and the world to die and I love pengins and polar bears, hope it doesn't happen to them too.
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