We are Team 17, a Year 6 class at Bailey Road School in Mt Wellington, Auckland, New Zealand. Our teacher is Mr. Wood and we want to share our learning with our whānau (family) and other learners. We hope you will enjoy our blog and leave us comments.
Monday, March 22, 2010
The Cobras Team
The Cobras Team drew some effects on our environment.
I love the artistic style you employed on this assignment. Because I have taught this particular subject I have no problem identifying the environmental problems, but I bet most people will not have a clue what your picture is showing. You have to remember your audience is no longer your classroom or your parents. When your picture is posted on the internet you must realize your audience does not have the background information you or I have. What could you add to the amazing pictures to help an ordinary person looking at it understand what you need them to know?
yeah!!! you guys should had labeled it so people knows about your picture.One qusetion ''Who did the picture?''Well if I'm right or wrong, ok I can see a volcanoe ,a tornados,lightings,earthquakes,windstorm.I have know idea if it's right or wrong I'm just saying.I'll ask you guys tomarrow
This picture is WOW!!!!!! & COOL TOO!!!!, I more thing it's a crazy thing you made, when you guys did this my sister wasn't there to help all well.........but good work.
The Cobras Team drew some effects on our environment.
I love the artistic style you employed on this assignment. Because I have taught this particular subject I have no problem identifying the environmental problems, but I bet most people will not have a clue what your picture is showing. You have to remember your audience is no longer your classroom or your parents. When your picture is posted on the internet you must realize your audience does not have the background information you or I have. What could you add to the amazing pictures to help an ordinary person looking at it understand what you need them to know?
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comment above. I love the drawing but what can you do or say to make your readers understand your message?
ReplyDeleteI like your drawing but I can not tell what it is. What is your drawing.Next time try to say a little bit about it.It is relly cool
ReplyDeleteI think your picture is crazy !!!! I mean look its cool but I don't under stand it like what's going on in the background ? and there is no info!!!!
ReplyDeleteGood work guys your art work are awesome.Like all the lightning,tornadoes and fire.
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ReplyDeleteI think that we could of labeled it to show the people what it is.
Well done Cobras, I really love the colours and the picture too.
ReplyDeleteyeah!!! you guys should had labeled it so people knows about your picture.One qusetion ''Who did the picture?''Well if I'm right or wrong, ok I can see a volcanoe ,a tornados,lightings,earthquakes,windstorm.I have know idea if it's right or wrong I'm just saying.I'll ask you guys tomarrow
ReplyDeleteThis picture is WOW!!!!!! & COOL TOO!!!!, I more thing it's a crazy thing you made, when you guys did this my sister wasn't there to help all well.........but good work.
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