We are Team 17, a Year 6 class at Bailey Road School in Mt Wellington, Auckland, New Zealand. Our teacher is Mr. Wood and we want to share our learning with our whānau (family) and other learners. We hope you will enjoy our blog and leave us comments.
Do you think having natural and man made problems on the same picture is the best way to show the problems? I like the art style of the picture, but I think it would have been much better if you had your labels right side up instead of rotated randomly. This poster is a presentation and you do not want to do anything that will make people miss the message because of the way you have it laid out.
You have thought of some good issues but have mixed natural and man-made problems together. What would you change to make your message clearer to your readers?
Hi Guys Awesome work your blog, It looks really good I like your bran storm its super cool. Come have a look at our blog http://springstonroom7.blogspot.com/.
Do you think having natural and man made problems on the same picture is the best way to show the problems? I like the art style of the picture, but I think it would have been much better if you had your labels right side up instead of rotated randomly. This poster is a presentation and you do not want to do anything that will make people miss the message because of the way you have it laid out.
ReplyDeleteBTW Did the guy caught in the tornado live?
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You have thought of some good issues but have mixed natural and man-made problems together. What would you change to make your message clearer to your readers?
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB girls.
ReplyDeleteWow those are lots of natural disasters there , what happens if those things really came true?
ReplyDeleteWe might all die if that really did happened.
ReplyDeleteBy not putting to much drawings on it and putting the words the proper way.
ReplyDeletePut the words the right way and not having to much details
ReplyDeleteHi Guys
ReplyDeleteAwesome work your blog, It looks really good I like your bran storm its super cool. Come have a look at our blog http://springstonroom7.blogspot.com/.
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