Do you think we have improved?
Are we achieving our learning intention?
We are Team 17, a Year 6 class at Bailey Road School in Mt Wellington, Auckland, New Zealand. Our teacher is Mr. Wood and we want to share our learning with our whānau (family) and other learners. We hope you will enjoy our blog and leave us comments.
I think you started with lots of hesitation and sounded like it was being read. However as you got into the story you started reading with more fluency. You also had some great expression that made the story come to life. I feel you lost the impact of some of the funny parts because the reading wasn't fluent in those parts.
ReplyDeleteHi Whero your readers theater sounds awesome I like how you use your expression.
ReplyDeleteI think that is the real story.
ReplyDeleteHi whero your readers theater sounds fantastic I like how you use expression and nice sound affects.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used expression and it sounds awesome god job!
ReplyDeleteI think that your expression is about 8 because you had a lot of expression which is really good leavl .I think that you fluently was about5 because you had a lot of space in your story.
ReplyDeleteGood work on reading your readers theater who would have thought that wolfs can be innocent.
ReplyDeleteI think your expression has improved from last time.
ReplyDeleteI really like your expression but at the start it sounded like 10 people at the same time saying the title but good expression, introduction, and a very good story.
ReplyDeleteI think your expression has improved from last time and I think it is very funny
ReplyDeleteHi Whero
ReplyDeleteI think that your expression is fantastic:D
I like your story because you guys read with lots of expression and fluency i still think that you can improve.
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