Cloudy picnic dayPeople having fun all day
Building sandcastles
by SC
Never say hello
If you really mean goodbye
Don't say I love you
by NN
Pools jumping around
Jumping up and down nicely
Refrigerator
by DW and MR
Windy cloudy dayPeople swimming happily
Making sand castles
by RC
Diving is so fun
Swimming is fun at the beach
There were lots of shells
by LM
Diving in the sea
Coming out cold and wet wary
And finally out
by CT
Windy picnic dayAs Team 17 enjoys it
All day in the sun
by AB
Big huge splashing waves
If you never start to plan
Never look into my eyes
by KM
Going on the bus
Building sandcastles with friends
Swimming and jumping
by JK
The sea is so blueWhile the shells sit on the sand
Building sand castles
by KW
Freezing picnic day
Finding shells and having fun
Making sand castles
by KG
Waves high in the sky
Waves going up and going down
Waves down in the sky
by LS
Sandflys flying roundBanging up banging down. Fly
When the're killed they lie
by BT
The beach is so fun
Its cold, wet and really wavy
Going back to school
by PN
Swimming in the sea
Playing with seashell and sand
Playing in the sun
by DG
Swim in the oceanThe seashells are so pretty
Freezing picnic day
by CG
The fuss on the bus
Talking children scream and shout
No one can stop them
by KP
The sun is shining
Kids swim, splash and play with sand
Sea shells flying up high
by LC
Nice day for picnicDiving in the open sea
Seashells we can sea
by SK
We went to the beach
We were playing touch rugby
The sea was too rough
by MM
Haiku's written by Team 17.
Dear Room 17 students
ReplyDeleteWOW! I am so excited to see that you are using a Blog at school and that Mr. Wood is putting your work up for the world to see.
On the day of the School Picnic I saw two Haiku's written in the sand and enjoyed reading them. I have put one in the school newsletter because it was absolutely fantastic to see your class using what you had learned at school at the beach.
Awesome work, I look forward to watching your Blog develop over time. (PS this is the first time I have blogged, so thank you!)
Mr. Linington
Hello Mr Wood. This is my first time as well on blogger because I keep forgetting the URL.
ReplyDeleteI really like our Haiku's that we wrote in the sand.
I look forward to the other things you blog.
We should put star of the day on the blog.
I look forward to look at the rest of the things you put on the blog.
Natalia
I think Natalia is right we should put Star of the Week on our blog and say why they earnt Star of the Week.
ReplyDeleteAnd maybe put a picture of them.
Our blog looks great.
My one is the 2nd to last.
ReplyDeleteShweta.K