tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post8946338812903419857..comments2011-05-21T03:11:30.941-07:00Comments on Bailey Road Team 17: The True Story of the Three Little PigsBailey Road School Team 17http://www.blogger.com/profile/05067620221287336498noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-24128142967549637472010-06-17T19:55:34.028-07:002010-06-17T19:55:34.028-07:00I like your story because you guys read with lots ...I like your story because you guys read with lots of expression and fluency i still think that you can improve.Nanonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-5120543328826637392010-06-11T01:49:38.686-07:002010-06-11T01:49:38.686-07:00Hi Whero
I think that your expression is fantastic...Hi Whero<br />I think that your expression is fantastic:DViolanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-31031256120417172402010-06-10T18:00:53.600-07:002010-06-10T18:00:53.600-07:00I think your expression has improved from last tim...I think your expression has improved from last time and I think it is very funnysheetelhttp://kidblog.org/team17/author/Sheetel/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-62014020415804217592010-06-10T17:52:11.295-07:002010-06-10T17:52:11.295-07:00I really like your expression but at the start it ...I really like your expression but at the start it sounded like 10 people at the same time saying the title but good expression, introduction, and a very good story.Shawnnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-79862764012863387032010-06-10T16:59:02.601-07:002010-06-10T16:59:02.601-07:00I think your expression has improved from last tim...I think your expression has improved from last time.Shradhanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-3382245681438734922010-06-10T16:54:16.106-07:002010-06-10T16:54:16.106-07:00Good work on reading your readers theater who woul...Good work on reading your readers theater who would have thought that wolfs can be innocent.Akanshahttp://kidblog.org/team17/author/Akansha/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-64615329428570607062010-06-10T16:18:12.739-07:002010-06-10T16:18:12.739-07:00I think that your expression is about 8 because yo...I think that your expression is about 8 because you had a lot of expression which is really good leavl .I think that you fluently was about5 because you had a lot of space in your story.Sharnikanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-43850627157096993772010-06-10T16:04:50.528-07:002010-06-10T16:04:50.528-07:00I like how you used expression and it sounds aweso...I like how you used expression and it sounds awesome god job!Stevennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-66369511122746505172010-06-10T15:55:47.481-07:002010-06-10T15:55:47.481-07:00Hi whero your readers theater sounds fantastic I l...Hi whero your readers theater sounds fantastic I like how you use expression and nice sound affects.nicknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-62297231645276514702010-06-10T15:52:57.137-07:002010-06-10T15:52:57.137-07:00I think that is the real story.I think that is the real story.Catherinenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-85777464338898598072010-06-07T13:48:33.183-07:002010-06-07T13:48:33.183-07:00Hi Whero your readers theater sounds awesome I lik...Hi Whero your readers theater sounds awesome I like how you use your expression.Bailey Road School Team 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/05067620221287336498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7982774788862992905.post-73785889486535379322010-06-05T14:17:51.848-07:002010-06-05T14:17:51.848-07:00I think you started with lots of hesitation and so...I think you started with lots of hesitation and sounded like it was being read. However as you got into the story you started reading with more fluency. You also had some great expression that made the story come to life. I feel you lost the impact of some of the funny parts because the reading wasn't fluent in those parts.Mr Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17917358324891648329noreply@blogger.com